personal essay

I liked the personal essay more then the last essay. I knew what I was writing about alot better. I did not like sharing my story with the people in my class it was kinda embarrassing. I think my paper is ok, I think it was the best example of a life changing event I could think of. I knew my rough draft had alot of spelling errors and I think I fixed all of them in my final draft. I believe I did a very good job on my paper and I hope my grade reflects the same.